i liked that. it was good. all 3 chapterz .sorry i havent reviewed since then. im weird. anywho i liked it , it was good , update soon . latz. ja ne (goodbye)

Woah another story named "legacy" hah your's is way more developed than mine is. Keep it up.

wow ! ahh !! that is so intense ! must update ... i mean ... ahh !

q and a ... why didn't the vamp. dude bite tien ?? i mean , he hit him and then went 4 logan ... why didn't he just bite him ... logan was furture away then tien was 2 him ... it makes no sense ...

grr ... well obviously u have a reason 4 doin that ...

how r the others goin 2 find them ?!?! EEP!

well anywayz , check yuaz latterz . bye . update soon .. love this story .. loved that chpter . bye .

wuoh . thats weird . ... and i still dont get why this is only happenin 2 him ...

update soon ... check yaz latterz . love the story . liked the chpter .. bye.

I really really liked this but for a small bit of critisism...it was very vague. I really enjoyed Devon's bit and his temple. But Rika's...what happens to her? Why doesn't it go into depth? I mean, her temple is a huge volcano! I think that many more readers would enjoy knowing what went on. Unless you're going into depth in a later chapter? I'd like to read more! This is great.

O Aneki 'tis got. YES CREEPY TUNNELS *dives in* Nya~! I like volcanoes! We should go dive near an underwater one someday! OMG THAT'D BE FUN! Great so far, Aneki! Can't wait for more!

i liked it ... plz continue when u can colt ... latterz ... im not spoz 2 be up .. .so sorry its sso short ... i liked it though ... latterz ^.^

that was weird ... but i REALLYZ liked it ^.^ ... cannot wait for u 2 UPDATE ! latterz ^.^ ... smell yuaz latterz ^.^ =P he he he ^.^ ... bye ^.^

Thank you for the first three chapters! ^_^ Update now. I mean it.
The wildflowers part was great. It's true that people spend more time thinking about fantasy places than appreciating their own world. Well, I guess Devon and Co. are sure appreciating it now, right?
Melody's asthma is definitely becoming a problem. Although here's something that might help you: asthma isn't as active in humid places. In fact, since we moved up here, I really haven't needed my inhaler much. And if she really does get an attack, lying down is the worst thing she could possibly do. Sit up as much as possible, or better yet, have her put her head between her knees and someone pound her back a little. That helps.
Well, I'm off. Eighteenth-century literature calls. ~Marina

And we're wandering...and wandering...and wandering some more. Through the desert. ^_^ I like the reference to video games/fantasy stuff. Most stories have characters that don't think of that if they end up in another world. Most of the time it's just how did I get here and how do I get home. ^_^ Logan being an idiot as usual is great. Imagery...coolness. So, all in all, great chappie. Now I move on to the next one. ~Marina

YAY! LEGACY! *dance dance* I'm happy, if you can't tell.
Well, I'm certainly noticing improvements from the dirst draft. The character personalities are defined much better. Loved the inhaler reference...^_^ Also appreciated the fact that Logan was a climber. And the truth or dare game.
So when enters Rika? *questioning look* Well, I suppose I'll find out. I gotta read the rest of this quickly so I can go read Candide for English...GAH!
Oh, and I read your reviews so far. Isn't it nice to have substance? ^_^ Okay, I'm gonna move on now. ~Marina

Awesome. You have a grasp of dialogue-and banter- that I will never command. Because of this, you don't need to actually spend several pages in description. You simply let the characters describe themselves. This, in turn, lets you concentrate on the action of your story (which is excellent, but might be confusing for anyone that hasn't rock climbed before.)
All in all, I don't see what's keeping the reviews away. Maybe your plot synopsis sounded too much like "Me and my friends get sucked into this huge adventure", even though your writing is much more sophisticated than that.
In any event, I would certainly like to read more. Put out another chapter as soon as you can.

Oh my, I love this story so far. I can't wait for the next installment!
I have a couple of suggestions for you though..
It might do your story some good to add some detail about people, places, events, etc. You wrote minimal background info about each person with the exception of devon, his disposition seemed expressed pretty well.. but you left much to much to the reader's imagination. How do the characters look? What were they wearing? I was able to put together a picture of everywhere they went.. I suppose from personal experience, but I didn't have much to go on with the characters. How old are they? I got the impression they were in school, but what grade? I actually thought they were adults at the very beginning, and then I read about the teacher and remembered Matt HAD to bring Melody. When you are first presented with various characters, it's hard to keep them straight, to remember which one was which. I didn't even know if devon was male or female. By the end, I understood each better, but I think you could have offered more about each from the get go. Like, I forgot how many people were in the group pretty much as soon I got to the chapter one, and I forgot whose sister Melody was. By the end, these things were apparent, but it was harder to understand the dialogue. Do you kind of get what I mean? Maybe all of these things were written, but as a reader, you don't always catch everything, so it has to be made very clear and even reiterated a few times. Oh, and I found this sentence:
And in all the caves there shows water wear, although no water source is present. We're think that the river that.
We're think that the river that? Maybe you left for a minute? the phone rang? lol. I make mistakes like this too! Or maybe you meant for devon's father to trip over his words when he saw devon and company weren't very interested? I'm not sure, it looked a little erroneous though. If that is the case, maybe you could make it more obvious, instead of just a typo.
But don't think I was meticulously scanning the chapter for errors! I was enjoying it! I like it a lot!! And then when devon fell.. oh! my god! I like your characters a lot too so far, like logan is irritatingly familiar. I think he's my favorite. Melody is a little disappointing because she's a little weak.. she seems a bit dainty.. but I'm sure you intended that! I don't suggest you change them, I'm just telling you what I'm getting from these characters, what I've observed.. and like I said, I like them a lot! I'd like to hear more about all of the characters, what type of people they are..
Oh, and I like the prologue a lot! How you introduce the story. The story flows well and I can relate to the characters and there is personality in references to them. There are a lot of funny parts too!
This story is very interesting, and I really do hope you finish it! I'm very hooked, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
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