I've heard the story only just once before, and your piece is quite articulate in description. You will produce more I hope, inshallah.

Again, amazing. You did a really good job, - you made the story a lot more interesting to read about than it was in the texts I've read about the Muslim religion. In English I think the journey is called "hegira" or "hejira", I take it "Hijrah" is the Arabic way of spelling it? Very cool. Again, keep it up.

I'm a muslim girl too! (check out my poems too, if you can!) mashallah, you write so beautifully. I will be reading your other poems as well. great poem...I'm happy to see islam finally being represented on this site! anyways, I loved how you strated it off. it was great...keep writing!

Very nice poem! Nice to see so many religions represented here! Peace be unto you.