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| Furbs 2004-12-27 ch 9,  | abuseWhat can i say except, SWEET! |
| Alaina 2004-12-19 ch 9, anon. | abuseHey, Liz. This was really good. You're awesome at writing so that it all seems so realistic. I like how you are evolving their relationship. One thing I noted, was that the religious aspect of this story seems to be too deliberate, but that might just be my personal preference. Oh, and when you insert a break, a few asterisks work well. Love ya, Liz! |
| DragonAiua 2004-12-19 ch 9, anon. | abuseI am so glad you finally updated! :-D I absolutely love it, although I would have prefered that you actually typed in WHAT she had said to him! |
| Limegreenqueen 2004-12-18 ch 9, | abusebeautiful beautiful beautiful! i know that some people on this web stie will be offended by the direction this story took but i love. I also believe like Leah and have been trying to put god in my stories without offending anyone. Now i know it really deosn't matter what offends any one only what i believe. Just how slash stories offend me but people still right them o will I wright about God. thank 4 the inspiration ,karla your friend |
| shadowstar21 2004-12-17 ch 9, | abuseThis is a really great story I cant wait 4 more! |
| Psalms121 2004-12-17 ch 9, | abuseOh Liz, I love it! It is fabulous. It's so sweet, romantic and exciting. I really like it a lot. Hope you update soon! ~Tara |
| No Life 2004-12-17 ch 9, | abuseGreat chapter love it can't wait for the next update. |
| thisspiltmilk 2004-10-27 ch 8, | abuseyou're the coolest, update soon. my new pirate story will be up very very soon. i'm really excited about it. you own. |
| windowbreak 2004-10-21 ch 8, | abuseomg i love your story! hehehe i see they're getting to like each other more and more each day... i likee! lol. ok well, it's too bad that it had to end here so update real quick! i hate waiting ;) great story yah? keep workin on it! |
| rock 'n' roll junkie 2004-10-19 ch 8, | abuselol, looks like our little Mitch is found of Leah, yay! This story rocks. I'm definitely putting you on my author alert list. |
| rock 'n' roll junkie 2004-10-19 ch 5, | abuseYay, church is gonna be involved now, isn't it!? lol, I'm a Christian and I take it you are too. I love these type of stories. Keep up the awesome work! |
| irishgurl 2004-10-19 ch 8, | abuseaw...Its so sweet! I like it alot! Please update soon!? |
| Arorra 2004-10-03 ch 7, | abusehey, the passport thing works much better now. :) I dont' see any problems with it! Good job, keep it up! |
| Psalms121 2004-09-26 ch 7, | abuseFantastic..purely fantastic. I just can't say anymore. Great job liz great job. |
| DragonAiua 2004-09-26 ch 7, | abuseI absolutely LOVE IT. please write more SOON. |