At the risk of looking like I'm stalking you, I'm posting to say that this poem is awesome to the extreme. I fell in love with it. I really did. The only thing I don't like is the way you repeated the flaws line. Although you used different words to rhyme, which corrects this "flaw" (like the way I did that? :P) Anyway, awesome work!

Brilliant, this one words says it all.

lovley and just purfect, I see what you are getting at great poem!

Potentially saves anyway.
Ravyn, you know how I feel abiout this, and what you said made me right for once! That Sakhmet is trying to convince her pret that she knows where to strike! n.n She's cool. Yaknow.
Love the rhythm though. Whatever else I could say doesn't matter. :D

Yeah, I understand it. Really, really well. I can tell what you mean with these words. Hey... isn't Sakhmet the goddess who saves Hunter in PTP?