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| crunchycheezit 2006-07-25 ch 1, | abuseWow. This was hilarious and wonderfully written! Did you really do all that? I wish I could. It sounds fun! (If terribly grueling.) I bow to your amazing writing ability! |
| Evelyn Skye 2006-01-04 ch 1, | abusesuch a clever way to tell a poem and give it a meaning. by writing a story with a poem intertwined. it's actually really hard to tell which was inspired by which because they blend together to make the perfect tale. (not perfect as in nothing wrong with it pefect but i'm sure you get my meaning) also, the meaning behind this peiece almost jumps out at you at the end, whereas it was pretty well diguised throughout the piece. i'm sure we could all learn that nothing is impossible, simply by reading this fantastic piece of work. very well done with this Jesto |
| KIRARARA 2005-06-29 ch 1, | abusewow that was a great story! hahha love your haikus, i cant write them without extending it to 6. 8. 6., then 8. 12. 8. so on, lol. good job! Arik |
| Nienyalie 2005-01-30 ch 1, | abuse*smiles* Very imaginative. Great job |
| kt in the sky 2005-01-08 ch 1, | abuse"Wet clothes cling as second skin," that's really good i like it! and i loved most of the backwards hukues... i know I'm not spelling that right... but still I LOVE most of them. how did you get your font so big? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? anyway i liked this, keep up the great work. -Kashe |
| LilGrimmy 2004-01-23 ch 1, | abuseEntertaining, fun. A 7,5,7 poem is a tanka I believe unless that was something longer. Interesting. |
| SpawnMeister666 2003-08-10 ch 1, | abuseHi there...interesting to say the least. Kinda strange take on the Haiku poetry, but nothing wrong with being a little different!! Good work, keep it up, and let me know if Liam ever answers your letters!! SpawnMeister6 |
| Kathryn Angelle 2001-04-09 ch 1, | abuseAh, I likes! Entertaining and funny...and I like your warped haiku! Just don't ask me to go up any mountains with you... |