I hearteth this poem. Beautiful imagery. (:

Amazingly beautiful! I think I'll have to kill you and steal all your ideas. :P

completely gorgeous. I know the feeling and i love how you said what i never could.

This is very well-written, and you really describe the infinite tranquil beauty of the sea with such intricate detail. And you use such unusual words that yet fit so perfectly. 'vanilla sounds'
Sing the song of the sea

Vanilla sounds great in C-minor, ah--you've captured it's taste!! -m-

I love this!! It has a Shakespeare flavor, but then holds its own style. Very, very good. Keep writing!

Wonderfuly crafted piece, with a great sense of your chosen subjects. I love your turn of phrase.
Very Well Done
Keep Writing!
F.C
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