Al, well, wut can i say...beautifully written & u managed to portray ur feelings into words. Remember im here if u need to talk aite? See u around & take care!
- Fi

very well written!!

I like this, you have a lot of honesty and that really grabs the readers attention. You have a talent with transfering emotion from the page to the reader. Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.