It's genius. My favorite line is "It's a splinter in my mind." That's great. Anyways, wonderful, I love it. Keep writing.
Kristen

i feel this way a lot lately and it scares me. it was well written...expressed emotions without coming off as being whiney and full of complaints. nice poem and i can relate, in a way.

This is a great poem. It's really deep. I can relate well with how you're feeling.

this is a fantastic poem. thank you for reviewing my poem. keep writing!

Very simple but incredibly deep. Its the rawness of the soul. thanx for the reivew. btw, luv your poems

Once again good! you have your own style of writing...just very flowy and it seems to reflect your thought very well

This is very well written. You are able to convey your emotions through very vivid images. good job. lady jedi