great story ^^ if you have the time, make it into a series ~ i agree with tess, we need info about the background of the gift!
hopefully my story will be up soon, or at least the first chappie. ^^

Excellent! Seems real enough, like it could happen so it's not really out there, much more down to earth. You need to split up your dialog a bit more because it can get confusing, but other than that, I don't see anything wrong with it.
It would be great if you turned it into a series. I for one would like to hear more about what happens as Liz learns more about her gift. Like how it works, why she has it, etc. We need more background and information about the gift. And there is enough that you could at least write a sequel continuing where this left off and explain everything in more detail. But that's just me being the way I am. I love long stories.

wow, that was confusing! XD good story tho! i wanna talk to animals...:D that would be awsome! i could make an army of spiders!...er...panthers? i like panthers! :) ok, an army of panthers, and i could have them attack!...um...help...people...XD

Great Work! It's a great idea! Though I think it was too short, and should have a lot more chapters, I liked it! It was a great read! Make this a series!