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| PrincessNancy 2008-07-26 ch 20,  | abuseOMG OMG OMG. LMAO! The Kama Sutra stunt was awesome. Mrs. Henderson is SUPER COL!.. I remember my dad makin fun of me, since I'd used 'Kama' instead of 'Vama' in one of the mantras I was chanting. He was like, "You are not even 15 and you're calling Kama?!" HAHAHAHAH! I'll never forget that. Oh, to continue reading... |
| atreyu love 2008-07-25 ch 41, | abuseLOGAN AND NOELLE? MATH AND LIVY? well, math and livy wouldnt be too surprising since it was definitely coming but Logan and Noelle? that would be so cool :) I love Logan :DD (perhaps a story for Neil? lol) but anywho, i absolutely LOVED this story :D pretty much amazing and it read it all in just hours!! haha. |
| atreyu love 2008-07-25 ch 40, | abusei thought the three words were going to be I love you. lol and thank god trask is not mad at them. |
| atreyu love 2008-07-25 ch 26, | abusethis is by far my FAVORITE chapter :) they are so adorable together! and this scene was just amazing. she definitely learned more about Ryan. and the movie part, so cute :D |
| atreyu love 2008-07-25 ch 25, | abuseim disappointed in the grandfather. now i feel for the Grandmother. |
| atreyu love 2008-07-25 ch 17, | abusethat was such a cute scene. dancing in a hallway then kissing :) |
| atreyu love 2008-07-25 ch 16, | abuseits official. Logan is my favorite character. Ryan is a close second :) |
| San123 2008-07-25 ch 41, anon. | abuseI just read the story all over again. It's so entertaining. I could easily see it getting published and then becoming a movie! |
| kitty.xo 2008-07-22 ch 41, | abusewow, this story was great. I love how the ending was. It wasn't a completely unbelivable ending how they lived "happily ever after" but yet you still let us think that they'll stay together. This story was pretty much perfect! I swear I was almost in tears mulitiple times in the last -I don't know- six? seven? chapters (and I'm not the type of person that cries a lot). So anyway this was great and now I'm off to read pretty much everything else you've written on here! :) Best wishes, kitty |
| Symphony of Colors 2008-07-20 ch 41, | abuseI love this story! Why didn't you make it a trilogy cuz i wanted to know more about Livy! Could you pweaase R&R my story? Its about how a entrance exam to high school changes 4 girls...forever. |
| xSilentTearsx 2008-07-17 ch 41, | abuseWow, you included everything in this story! =P Romance, humour, big time drama etc. I read this story so long ago and yet it never ceases to amaze me. Loved it! Thanks for writing. |
| Slow Motion Walter 2008-07-17 ch 1, | abuseLol, another great chapter. I still hate Raliegh for being a serious spaz but I like Ryan; he doesn't seem to be that much of a jerk. Hey guys check out my original story! I'm sure you'll all like it ;p |
| mistress tee 2008-07-17 ch 41, | abusemy oh my. I definitely loved this book a Lot! great job on it! :D |
| StarsWatchAsIDance 2008-07-16 ch 41, | abuseJust so you know- I finished at 5:45 in the morning and I was WAY too tired to comment. I think that meant I read your story in about 6 hours... I absolutely loved this story with all my heart. It was beautifully written and the characters and emotions really connected. Your writing style is very involving- your stories are so fabulous that they should be published- they're better than most stories that are being published. I absolutely love Raleigh and Ryan together, though I feel kind of bad for Neil. And Logan...I actually kind of do like him against my wishes. Livy and Kevin, in my opinion, are not a very good pair, but what can you do? Anyway, keep up the awesome writing!! If you get a chance, could you R&R my story too- I would really appreciate that from an author like you- thanks so much for the entertaining ride! |
| l0v3abl3 2008-07-16 ch 41, | abuseAw. A relatively happy ending. :D Loved it. - l0v3abl3 |