So I am going to try to read your stories on LiveJournal. Sorry you had to go through that. I don't understand why people do that. I have never used LiveJournal before, so I hope I can figure it out!

.,yey! this story so exciting :).. well i really dnt know on how to speak english im just 14 and I live in philippines :D... trying mah best though :)

I absolutly adore what I have read so far, and am very sorry that it was ever plagiarized from. The one thing that I could see that could use improvement is that you are rather obvious in using, almost exclusivly, direct characterization, where I feel that by substituting some more subtle characterization for the repeated phrases such as "man hater" Also, I would like to see more of the relationship dynamics amongst the non Raleigh and Ryan characters, such as Raleighs relationship with her brother, her friends relationship with eachouther, etc. I feel that it would lend a depth to the story that would otherwise be consitered missing. On the whole though, great job, I hope to read more of your storys.

First, I guess I should apologize, for alas I confess to being a "silent reader". I'm sorry! But I never know what to say and then any reviews I would write would just end up insinsere as they would all say the same thing

So,what made me review this? Plagiarism Haven I guess :) as evidently, I'm hoping for an acceptance

Anyways I think I may have stumbled upon this story before, I empathize with Raleigh on the man-hater front (hehe sometimes I think I may be anthromorphic...). But (again) I'm sorry for the lack of response on this as it's a bit difficult if there's only one chapter *hint hint*

No not really, I support you I guess on the anti-plagiarism front.

It's been a while since I last read this story, but it still remains fresh on my mind. I simply can't resist a vulnerable yet egotistical jerk :)

aw

i wanted to read chapter 2! ahh well chapter 1 was REALLY good!

ill go cry in a corner now :'(

This is my favourite story on Fiction Press. I was so angry to see it go along with all those other great works. I hope they catch that plagairiser! I just got a Live Journal account so hopefully I will be accepted so i can read and review your and the other authors works xoxo

Hi, I really like this story and hope I get to read the rest of it. I just made a live journal account and now trying to join your community. Accept please.. :)

haha..this is really interesting..

So...where's the full story??!!

This story was my absolute favorite! I hope the person that plagerized you goes to hell ): I love your username btw (:

hey I just came across this story =)
I love your style and I'm going to join your community kay?

wowt this first chapter is really interesting
too bad i've only seen read one chapter as this story has been removed due to evil people plagarising
anyway, i hope i can read the rest of this story if i join your community!
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i read this story a couple of months ago, and i felt in love with it. it's just too sad that it has been removed cuz it was an awesome story! i feel bad for those that haven't had the chance to read it. you are a great writer, you should totally publish this novel, i would totally buy the book!!

This is a really great story, and I am sorry for your troubles with it.
I will post a request to join Plagiarism Haven, and I'm begging you to accept! I would be really sad if I couldn't read the rest of the story.