 Teenyjewel 2009-11-08 . chapter 2So I am going to try to read your stories on LiveJournal. Sorry you had to go through that. I don't understand why people do that. I have never used LiveJournal before, so I hope I can figure it out! |
 enkii 2009-11-07 . chapter 1.,yey! this story so exciting :).. well i really dnt know on how to speak english im just 14 and I live in philippines :D... trying mah best though :) |
 notakathy 2009-11-05 . chapter 1I absolutly adore what I have read so far, and am very sorry that it was ever plagiarized from. The one thing that I could see that could use improvement is that you are rather obvious in using, almost exclusivly, direct characterization, where I feel that by substituting some more subtle characterization for the repeated phrases such as "man hater" Also, I would like to see more of the relationship dynamics amongst the non Raleigh and Ryan characters, such as Raleighs relationship with her brother, her friends relationship with eachouther, etc. I feel that it would lend a depth to the story that would otherwise be consitered missing. On the whole though, great job, I hope to read more of your storys. |
 Cupcakes-XD 2009-11-02 . chapter 1First, I guess I should apologize, for alas I confess to being a "silent reader". I'm sorry! But I never know what to say and then any reviews I would write would just end up insinsere as they would all say the same thing
So,what made me review this? Plagiarism Haven I guess :) as evidently, I'm hoping for an acceptance
Anyways I think I may have stumbled upon this story before, I empathize with Raleigh on the man-hater front (hehe sometimes I think I may be anthromorphic...). But (again) I'm sorry for the lack of response on this as it's a bit difficult if there's only one chapter *hint hint*
No not really, I support you I guess on the anti-plagiarism front. |
 Unwritten.prose 2009-10-22 . chapter 1It's been a while since I last read this story, but it still remains fresh on my mind. I simply can't resist a vulnerable yet egotistical jerk :) |
 orikasakuragi 2009-10-18 . chapter 2aw
i wanted to read chapter 2! ahh well chapter 1 was REALLY good!
ill go cry in a corner now :'( |
 eyes-on-fire2009 2009-10-17 . chapter 1This is my favourite story on Fiction Press. I was so angry to see it go along with all those other great works. I hope they catch that plagairiser! I just got a Live Journal account so hopefully I will be accepted so i can read and review your and the other authors works xoxo |
 aadeline 2009-10-16 . chapter 1Hi, I really like this story and hope I get to read the rest of it. I just made a live journal account and now trying to join your community. Accept please.. :) |
 reizuki 2009-10-11 . chapter 1haha..this is really interesting.. |
 xxXNightsareDaysXxx 2009-10-06 . chapter 1So...where's the full story??!! |
 Inflorescent 2009-09-23 . chapter 41This story was my absolute favorite! I hope the person that plagerized you goes to hell ): I love your username btw (: |
 SunsetRainbow 2009-09-18 . chapter 2hey I just came across this story =)
I love your style and I'm going to join your community kay? |
 serenityxoxo 2009-09-12 . chapter 1wowt this first chapter is really interesting
too bad i've only seen read one chapter as this story has been removed due to evil people plagarising
anyway, i hope i can read the rest of this story if i join your community!
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 MelodieCC 2009-08-28 . chapter 1i read this story a couple of months ago, and i felt in love with it. it's just too sad that it has been removed cuz it was an awesome story! i feel bad for those that haven't had the chance to read it. you are a great writer, you should totally publish this novel, i would totally buy the book!! |
 Ashley Watts 2009-08-09 . chapter 1This is a really great story, and I am sorry for your troubles with it.
I will post a request to join Plagiarism Haven, and I'm begging you to accept! I would be really sad if I couldn't read the rest of the story. |