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Reviews For: A Certain Soldier's Last Thoughts
Pont 2004-11-16 . chapter 1
I like this. Very descriptive, emotional, and thought provoking. This is definitely a subject I've unfortunately dredged up in past poetry too, and I love how you did it. I like how you put things into perspective at the end. This is very well done. Keep up the good work!
~pont
Silverkuja 2004-09-06 . chapter 1
"Noise
Noise echoes in my head
Bodies
Bodies covered in red"
I really liked that part - It flowed so well. Your writing is very good and you include many if not most of the dilemmas and hardships facing a soldier. *Thumbs Up* ^-^
Giraffe 63 2004-08-24 . chapter 1
Interesting and sad. Nice work.
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