scintillating. your poems always stir something deep within me, and connect so damn well with poetic imagery, meaning and that elusive something associated with true works of art. You have oodles of talent. Damn :)

thickwig

Very thought provoking and it's certainly more then coherent. Excellent.

this is interesting. quite thought provoking.
thanks for review 'a wicked game' i guess i wasnt too clear. the wicked game was cutting. and i said 'loser dies',(its not past tense) as in if she actually does take her life. 'deaths trinket' was a knife. and 'will she survive?', meaning, will she over come her desire to kill herself.
-firehair

This is good; you're a good poet! I could never write poetry like this...
Well, good job,
x-zai

Wow, your truly talented, this was filled with beautiful imagry and abstract detail. Amazing, keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.