I think even though you use a lot of imagery in this (nice idea with the Phoenix btw), you reveal a great deal of your own heart too... Of how you felt, of what you fear... but it really helps to let one see it from your point of view. Interesting.

another goodie!

Your peom is awsome but every time I read Phoenix, Suzaku popped into my head. Apart from that I loved it. *sigh, bats eyelashes* Oh, Declan!