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Reviews For: Shattered Mask

Morbid Maxwell
2005-04-05
ch 1,
abuseI liked this one. I know what you mean, by saying I'm the stone that stays sane, that would be me...and when my mask shattered, it wasn't good. But this poem was! You did an awesome job and I'd like to see more soon.

Morbid Maxwell-It's a Beyblade orgy!
Kasumi Kage
2005-02-19
ch 1,
abuseWow...so emotional. It's great, I love the whole concept and...*shrugs shoulders* I can't think of anything else to say except that this was an excellent piece of writing that really touched me. *nods*
long forgotten
2004-09-11
ch 1,
abuse100% good! Your poem is really good! and i feel the same way too but the last line. to me, not the same anyways it really shows how you felt if your mask had shattered. and honestly your poem is related to mine's. anyways your poem is really 100% good ! i assure that! ;winks: from,
the wandering rabbit
kuneho
Fireyforce
2004-08-24
ch 1,
abuseWow! That was amazing! I'm the same way, the stone, the one people go to, the one that has to stay strong and sain. Sometimes though you just have to let go. That was really really good.
Fireyforce
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