I liked it, but the ending could have been better, and the whole "I fyou are killed many times in a short amount of time you really die" bit shjould have been explained before, because at theend when I read that I knew that Ziven was goign to die. Other then that it was good though.

Well, I remember you saying that this is one of your better stories. It's good, but I still prefer the Nothingness or the Black Hole.
I think you kind of repeated yourself a bit too much. Some words, some sentance even sounded the same. Don't take it personal though! I still think it's brilliant.
>wolfy