Wow...that was insane...awesome...

Sorry to say Amy, but that was actually a good plot line. ^^ You didn't have to keep the random stupidity intact through the entire thing to keep it interesting. Bravo!

Ha. Reminds me of a story on fanfiction (that isn't really fanfiction and should be here) about Mary-Sues. Of course that tells you almost nothing of relevant information. A little choppy, but mostly well written. I must go.
Cheerio
HOKI