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| katieee 2008-05-16 ch 12,  | abuseIm addicted. to this story. And. . .theres no more chapters. Gah. :[ Im really really into this story. I love it so much. Wow. :] |
| katieee 2008-05-16 ch 11, | abuseOh dear. He knows now. Maybe it's better? Maybe it's not. But that girl; I don't like her. |
| katieee 2008-05-16 ch 10, | abuseWow; at first I was shaken by Arty's thought about wishing it was anyone even Erin except her. It was kind of selfish but I can't even bring myself to want to keep that word there since she was getting raped. Wow. And then Ian said her name! Im so happy. :] And then Alex came into the end. And it was perfect. :] |
| katieee 2008-05-16 ch 9, | abuse:] I like Alex. Ahahahhaha, I don't have much else to say. except AH. She found him. - I kind of forgot about that part by the end though. :] My minds wrapped up around Alex |
| katieee 2008-05-16 ch 8, | abuseI like the two of them together. |
| katieee 2008-05-16 ch 7, | abuseI liked this chapter. Every story I read the girl seems to run all the time. God, I want to do that. I have a really huge urge to run right now. |
| katieee 2008-05-16 ch 6, | abuse:] I like their agreement. |
| katieee 2008-05-16 ch 5, | abuseI really liked it :] |
| katieee 2008-05-16 ch 4, | abuseI was very happy when she hit that guy. I had to read it twice, ahaha. |
| katieee 2008-05-16 ch 3, | abuseJust so you know, I think you missed a 'y' in body because it just says boy in the ninth paragraph from the bottom. I kind of think its funny that her clothing measurements are all messed up. :] |
| katieee 2008-05-16 ch 2, | abuseI like the boys. :] They make me laugh. |
| katieee 2008-05-16 ch 1, | abuseWow, the ending was really intense. But Im glad Erin was it - ? - was the first to find Arty and to stay with her. But im really sad she had to go. |
| Regin 2008-05-05 ch 12, | abuseI Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!! |
| Jayjack 2008-04-30 ch 5, | abuseweird. so he was the guy making fun of her saying she wouldn't hit the target. weird. |
| Mercury Fields 2008-04-28 ch 12, | abuseWow alex is so intense. its amzing that you can create all these carecters who are so amazingly real. Great job. |