|Reviews for She|
| Eirien 9/6/04 . chapter 1
Beautifully written, it sounds like a ballad the way it tells a story, or an epic maybe. One feels like the end is just the beginning, it goes on forever. Touching piece.
| Audrey Portman 8/26/04 . chapter 1
| Pamplemousse 8/25/04 . chapter 1
The rhyming words of the second and last lines of each verse really work. The poem expresses the girl well. Keep it up.
| do not resuscitate 8/24/04 . chapter 1
great poem/song. awesome rhyming, your words flowed excellently.