|Reviews for Heart For Sale|
| Emerald Lynne Stonne 1/17/05 . chapter 1
That's really cute... I like it lots!
| writingwithfire 9/4/04 . chapter 1
Simple and effective. The final line clinches it, but you might try to change the broken in the second line. A haiku is so short it is best not to use the same word in it twice. Anyway, I liked it. Most haiku's focus on imagery, but your poem was refreshing.
| somethingpoeticandmeaningful 9/1/04 . chapter 1
Wow. This is my favorite one of your new ones. I really like it, awesome job.
| Faithless Juliet 8/26/04 . chapter 1
Nice, beautiful use of language.