 Juliet Squared 2005-01-15 . chapter 1Well, my best girl percussion player, you've made your mark on us all, and I know, you're well on your way to kicking serious **. Your thoughts are expressed really well. Go for it. |
 a e i o u and sometimes y 2004-09-03 . chapter 1I loved that! It's really inspiring too, and that's exactly the thing I needed to read at the moment. |
 avidelecteur 2004-08-31 . chapter 1That's really inspiring- saying "You don't always have to be perfect." It really fits my mood right now, too, so I was rereading it and realized I hadn't reviewed. This is one of my favorites of your recent poems. |
 EveryNowAndThen 2004-08-25 . chapter 1I love this for a few reasons:
1. You can take the subject of your drumline and construct it into a magnificent poem.
2. "show you I'm not just silence and attempted compliance" The rhyme isn't forced and it fits perfectly and adds some poetic grace to the piece.
3. It's not a love poem. I wish I could write something that's not. I wish anyone could write something that's not. Good job. |
 Silent Star4 2004-08-25 . chapter 1Very nicely written, I think we've all been feeling like that this week. Love the excitement that you feel when you read it, it's just great to know that you're gonna keep on trying. |