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| ColdFrost 2004-12-07 ch 1, | Wow. This is amazing. Great emotion. Very well written |
| Irrational Exuberance 2004-09-18 ch 1, | Without needless angst, this eloquently describes feelings of betrayal and hurt. There are no hackneyed phrases about broken winged angels and bloody tears, your words are all your own. Amazing job. |
| do not resuscitate 2004-08-25 ch 1, | very tastefully displays very real and very angry feelings. i really liked this, it was very good. |