   hazza1508 2008-11-15 . chapter 8cmon dude this story seems really good u should really update now i epeat NOW. i know uv heard this be4 probly but really cmon buddy u can do it dont let this go to waste espcially when there is clearly so much more 4 us readers to read |
 Wanabet 2008-06-01 . chapter 8SWET! This is so well written, you should consider continuing it, if so I will be here. Update soon! |
 Die In A Hole With Penguins 2008-04-29 . chapter 8OMG! You Have To Update This Is An Uber Good Story! I Love It |
 Chloe Caralee 2007-06-27 . chapter 8I hope you update this story, I wana find out what happens. |
 Susan 2007-05-23 . chapter 8 THIS IS SO GREAT! PLEASE! DO MORE! |
| Sil 2007-04-15 . chapter 8 What a great story! Please, write more soon! I can't wait to know if "the Gift One" will be a bastard forever :P or if he'll be nice someday. ^^
Does Kieran have magic? If he's the other half and all that, shouldn't he have magic too? |
 DRAGONFIRE04 2007-03-26 . chapter 8I like your story. Please update real soon. |
 darrena 2007-01-29 . chapter 8Wow! I'm so happy! It was such a wonderful surprise to find that you have updated this story not with one chapter, but with 4! I mean... I'm still grinning like a lunatic ^_^. I must say that I enjoyed reading them very much... this story is absolutely brilliant :) |
 CaFFy 2007-01-20 . chapter 8Update soon. |
| chiisaisaru 2007-01-16 . chapter 6 Keep up the good job. Please update soon. I love the plot. |
 Painted Desert 2007-01-10 . chapter 2oh i like this so far! |
 lets play musical graves 2006-10-28 . chapter 7stoppit!! you're being a poop. you leave me hanging at every turn...finish 'Roughly Cut Diamond' and that other one i read that i can't remember the name of! you keep leaving me on a cliffy... |
| CaFFy 2006-10-24 . chapter 7 Erf. I want action. -chants 'I want action.'- XD Yay! Update! |
 Esquirella 2006-10-24 . chapter 7Sounds ominous! |
| CaFFy 2006-09-21 . chapter 6 More...? |
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