 Michael Dempsey 2005-02-04 . chapter 1Brilliant again. You're so good at writing these haikus. Keep it up! |
 Whatever-I-Say 2005-01-31 . chapter 1Amazing haiku! I think a lot of people can relate to this. Your choice of words amaze me in you haikus, very captivating! ~Keep writing! |
 white-clouds 2004-11-05 . chapter 1Simple but very strong.
~Lara;) |
 philoslove 2004-10-20 . chapter 1This happens all the time when I'm holding a donation can out to people in town. So true... |
 Beyond The Dark Side 2004-09-01 . chapter 1Really good, I like the way you write.
'Shippou' |
 twilightwriter07 2004-08-29 . chapter 1Lovely...simply fantastic. =) |
 Emi Amara 2004-08-27 . chapter 1Hi! This is sad, but powerful. Well done
**WG |
 MorbidMan 2004-08-26 . chapter 1Nice one. I enjoyed this. |
 silversilk 2004-08-26 . chapter 1 Three words: I love it. |
 Flying Mango Bean Tackler. 2004-08-25 . chapter 1Interesting, I liked the summary it did justice to the poem and I find it hard to find ones that do. I like this one, I feel like I kinda relate to it. Good Job Cupcake;)
-Mel |
 Infamous Writer 2004-08-25 . chapter 1Nicely done. I haven't read haikus very much but you seem to write them very well. |
 David Stephen 2004-08-25 . chapter 1You are brilliant at writing these Haikus. They appear to come so naturally to you - and they are not forced and flow wonderfully. I will read the story you have added in due course (I am currently so busy).
~David~ |
 SweetMisery15 2004-08-25 . chapter 1I feel like that sometimes |