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Michael Dempsey 2005-02-04 . chapter 1
Brilliant again. You're so good at writing these haikus. Keep it up!
Whatever-I-Say 2005-01-31 . chapter 1
Amazing haiku! I think a lot of people can relate to this. Your choice of words amaze me in you haikus, very captivating! ~Keep writing!
white-clouds 2004-11-05 . chapter 1
Simple but very strong.
~Lara;)
philoslove 2004-10-20 . chapter 1
This happens all the time when I'm holding a donation can out to people in town. So true...
Beyond The Dark Side 2004-09-01 . chapter 1
Really good, I like the way you write.
'Shippou'
twilightwriter07 2004-08-29 . chapter 1
Lovely...simply fantastic. =)
Emi Amara 2004-08-27 . chapter 1
Hi! This is sad, but powerful. Well done
**WG
MorbidMan 2004-08-26 . chapter 1
Nice one. I enjoyed this.
silversilk 2004-08-26 . chapter 1
Three words: I love it.
Flying Mango Bean Tackler. 2004-08-25 . chapter 1
Interesting, I liked the summary it did justice to the poem and I find it hard to find ones that do. I like this one, I feel like I kinda relate to it. Good Job Cupcake;)
-Mel
Infamous Writer 2004-08-25 . chapter 1
Nicely done. I haven't read haikus very much but you seem to write them very well.
David Stephen 2004-08-25 . chapter 1
You are brilliant at writing these Haikus. They appear to come so naturally to you - and they are not forced and flow wonderfully. I will read the story you have added in due course (I am currently so busy).
~David~
SweetMisery15 2004-08-25 . chapter 1
I feel like that sometimes
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