Great. The chill of reality that comes off this just rules. thats all I can really say, it just gives images, lending itself to the reader.
*little note. Yesh, I know not all women Are/were like that, But I wrote it in a boring history class. WHo can blame me? .

i thought that this was very well written, very interesting. good job
color outside the lines
ps thank u for ur review!

Wow, that's excellent! Your word choice and rhyme are really terrific and you have created a very powerful imagery. Keep up! I can't wait to read more.
Lots of love,
Juliana

very nice imagery and rhyming especially the internal rhyme

Good word choice and rhythm. Nice work. -.-

Powerful, I really applaud you for what your saying here, and the voice and style that you choose to do it with. Great piece, keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.