This was very good, your writing painst a picture in my mind of what is going on and it makes it very easy to understand.

Your thoughts are imaginative, and your work moving. I like your manner of expression.

Oh, wow. That was sad. So much emotion. Very good job, that's all I can say. :'( So sad!

thats really sad, but very well put.

Dude, this the second time your work has almost made me cry... I didn't though, 'cause i'm a guy, and guys never cry about anything ever. But great work.

this is great! im really enjoying your poetry!

Another amazing piece by you, ongradulations, i loved this one as well!!

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Darn, Girl! your writing is spectacular!! i can see everything that you write...feel everything..smeel it hear it, touch it...such magnificance in poetry is hard, WONDERFUL job!
Btw...silly question...:-s your bio on your page "i love my panda" do you have a pet panda?
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Hmm...very sad.

this was wonderfully written and very beautiful. ah yeah, romeo and juliet...i remember reading that freshman year. i *knew* there was something familiar about the beginning lines of this, but i just couldn't quite put my finger on it...hahaha, good work! :)