Reviews for Subverted: Tales of a Dark Edged Mind

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Crewger 2006-09-04 ch 3,	abuseI love the style of the writing
eve 2005-03-24 ch 3, anon.	abuseoh jeez... that was really quite good, but VERY disturbing... tt fairytale will never be the same again...
really_bad_egg 2004-12-09 ch 3, anon.	abuseAll of the stories were good, but i think witch blood flowers was the best. Although I have to say its too bad he was not able to get his revenge.. but it added to the mystery of the ending. Very nice applause
Anjeni Windsinger 2004-12-03 ch 3,	abuseO__O Geez... wow... lol, I guess you can see how astounded I am by this piece. I'm not big on fiction, but I thought, hey, it's glitterjewele, how can it be bad? Anyway, I friggin' love this. Your descriptions are excellent - I recall a line about outstretched bird wings that I especially liked - and it's just amazing how you've concocted this story, what with the content and all. And the ending is nothing short of brilliant. Awesome write, I really should read the other two now, eh, lol.
godawful teen-angst poetry 2004-11-09 ch 1,	abusecome now--are you ever not brilliant? ;) you need to upload more poetry please ma'am!
oh no I'm a pirate 2004-09-19 ch 3,	abuseHee... he... Yes, I realise at this point in time that I sound slightly unhinged, but it's all good! I really like how you've done these stories. Phone Call has made me paranoid of the phone ringing at night, Victim has made sure that I can't look at my cat the same way again, and WitchBlood Flowers has made my Classic Fairytales book strictly off limits. Fantastic work, I loved every word! Kissi
not sure yet 2004-09-19 ch 3,	abuseo, creepy as **, and very sadful as well, witches blood flowers? hm, anywayz, loves it muchly, extremely well written, excellent job
Sarah Parker 2004-09-18 ch 3,	abuseWow... Aimee Raven recommended this to me while we were having a conversation that was realted to this topic... and I must say... this story left a sick feeling in my stomach, and a horrible feeling of unjustness and .. poor Hansel and Gretel. :( I love the fact that you used a child's tale like this to write about such a very... serious thing. It's truly amazing, and incredibly powerful... I don't think anyone could get the message across better than you did in this story. The symbolism and emotion and.. wow, everything is so perfect and I think I held my breath for the whole thing... definitely was biting my nails through it all. Amazing.
Dirty Wallpaper 2004-09-10 ch 3,	abuseoh...dear...god. ` ` ` ` ` ` ` ` ` i believe this is the first piece of work i have ever read on this website which left me gaping in horror multiple times, and in which i had to gain my mind back at the end. sobs hystericaly OH MY GOD! but the hug in the authors note made me feel slightly better. ok now that ive gotten over myself i loved the spin you put on hanzel and gretel, the elaboration, the detail of the flower which was so effective in...well, it was a hauntingly powerful trigger for one thing, and also how you turned it from something seemingly peaceful and beautiful into something so ugly and evil in what it repersented. am i naughty if i say i now find hazel terribly attractive? runs away thought so. very cool, i need my security bubble popped now and then, kudos! (uber kudos for adventuring out of your comfort zone). need sleep...fainting...collapsing on...keybo-
icytigerwarrior 2004-09-05 ch 3,	abuseO! Very good! I like this one. I guess it's because I have a very twisted mind and like dark twisted stuff. Or maybe it's just one of my squirrels influencing me. Yes, that's probably what it is. Pecan doesn't like them, but Skippy sure does. As does Blackberry (who will make her appearance in the ficcie that is coming along at snail pace)Anywhoozles, nice work, and update soon!
Single White Rose 2004-09-03 ch 3,	abuseI love this whole idea of twisted fairy tales. I love sad endings... it's real.
Aimee Raven 2004-09-03 ch 3, anon.	abuseHey...omg...this is certainly terrifying, but this subject NEEDS to be discussed! I admire you for writing this, it's amazing and truly very shocking. The way you wrote it made me tremble, worse than any allusion to paedophilia. Brilliant work...you should write more about things like these...putting this on my faves...I'm still in shock...but absolutely stunning in a dark but positive way...Love, Mia
Dirty Wallpaper 2004-08-31 ch 2,	abuseoh dear shivers i havent read something resembling as horror in ages really. i mean i used to read them all the time...until i became addicted to the soppyness that is romance novels...BASTARDS! man, this was freaky. there were 2 really clear images in there: her green eyes in slits, and also the claws. they were very strong and effective, greatness. "I try not to remember their names." aww sob the sadness. and then the last line...all detatched and spooky and such... "I'm always after you." ze awesomeness. great work (as per usual) kudos! ` P:S - burning is such a wonderful option, no? hehehe. and remember, i have to talk to you before you cross any big bodies of water. i tend to hold grudges for a few seconds - - take care, hopefully the pain of the packing is/will be over soon! preferably by means of fire...
princess cheezeball 2004-08-31 ch 2, anon.	abusei will never look at a mouse the same way again... hehe. this chapter is so cool. you really identified with the mouse. poor mouse. hehe. God bless. can't wait for the next installment.
icytigerwarrior 2004-08-30 ch 2,	abuseDark side huh. Very interesting. I liked this one. Keep it up! The squirrels were on the edge of their perch. Walnut almost fell off, but still, very very good work!

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