Green apple Thou chew,

Jealous my heart doth eschew,

Thy kisses it stole.

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Warm Thou embrace love,

Jealous my heart time forsook,

Thy gentle touches.

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Thou, dream of my dreams,

Jealous mind empties all else,

Soft Thy entreaties.

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Midnight lover Thou,

Jealous day hides obscurely,

Thy rays light my eve.

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Thou soft rug of days,

Jealous feet tread silken threads,

Woven Thy mist breath.

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Thou,—for no one else,

Jealous can make my heart more,

Except for Thy love.

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Thou art my soul's eyes,

Jealous, flashing at my glance,

Penetrating Thy . . .

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Thou, longest blue dream,

Jealous yellow sparkles bright,

At Thy sky spread wide.

I like this poem alot. Great job! Thanks for reviewing for me!

wow this was beautiful!

it's not chessy. It's really cute. I love "Anyone that you know is someone I want to be". Thanks so much for reviewing all my work!

:'( Maybe you think it's cheesy, but aw that's cute! My favorite two lines are "Anyone that you know, is someone i want to be", hehe! . short and sweet, it made me smile! *write on*

dude, it may be cheezy, but its soo sweet! it so sums up that dogged following of someone who means so much.
Han

gRR. LOVE SHOULD DIE. NOT REALLY WHATEVER. I REALY DO THINK THIS IS THE CHEEZIEST POEM I'VE READ BUT THE BEST ONE TOO. LOL I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT I'M SAYING... GRR.. OR MEANING!

I wouldn't say cheezy. It's pretty good. Not my kind of poem but I like it.
W,
The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King

Aw, that is really sweet. And it has great rhythm and awesome rhyming.

sweet