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| Reviews for The Holy Ghost |
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   Arlothia 7/16/10 . chapter 1Hello fellow Latter Day Saint! It's so nice to find other LDS people on here! I liked your story/poem. I love that a)it's true, b)all other Mormons on here understand it, and c)it teaches non-members about our beliefs. If you know of any other LDS authors on here please let me know. I would love to chat with them. I'm about to post a story about missions. Check it out! Keep it up! Arlothia |
| The Book of Mormon Heroine 8/4/09 . chapter 1 Hello fellow Mormon. I just registered for this site, and I have already, and finally, found a mormon! I love this poem. It happens to be very meaningful and nice for all. Love you girl! |
| Elidhu 12/1/06 . chapter 1 I remember when I got baptised I loved it. And I believe that we really do need the Holy Ghost to get away from all the alluring temptations. Like the Prophet said, these are the hardest times. Ciao Bethany Smith |
| Broken Telephone 11/26/05 . chapter 1 This is really beautiful! I'm LDS, too, and this poem totally made my day! I really needed a reminder have a little more faith in Heavenly Father (He really knows what her's doing) You are totally awesome man! GREAT JOB! |
| TCGanimefan357 10/31/05 . chapter 1 Yay! That must be a tough job, they Holy Ghost has. Still, gotta' love that guy. |
| Challijo 10/27/05 . chapter 1 Aw! I love this poem! I hope you write more! |
| InspirASIAN 10/20/05 . chapter 1 beautiful! |
| pianofingers7 9/4/05 . chapter 1 I'm Mormon! I'm Mormon! OOH! PICK ME! lol just kidding. LOVE IT! you're great. |
| Ladybuguboo 6/22/05 . chapter 1 This is really good! I’m a Mormon too, so I get this. It really shows what it is. |
| Princess JoJo 4/12/05 . chapter 1 go mormon princess! heck yes! |
| Moroni's Daughter 2/24/05 . chapter 1 I love this. Perfect way to describe how the Holy Ghost feels. |
| Natali G. Williams 2/19/05 . chapter 1 neat, neat... i like it too... and I love that you stand up for your beliefs and aren't afraid to tell people to shut it before they say anything about it...u go girl! Jesus is my Savior - Camille de Fusscci |
| QTgirly 12/7/04 . chapter 1 awesome- I'm lds too. I saw that your penname is mormon princess1 so i decided to check out your stuff. this is good, but a little choppy. You could try to make it sound smoother. STAND IN HOLY PLACES AND BE NOT MOVED! |
| Scarlet Azalea 11/2/04 . chapter 1 I like this poem. It's simple, but it has meaning... and I understand it and relate to it. *grin* I write about my faith too... somehow putting it down in verse makes it clearer to yourself, concretizes it. I think you have the potential to go deeper though. |
| wantedINheaven 11/2/04 . chapter 1 Nice and simple, yet it carries meaning! I like when things work that way, even if it isn't somethign I'm exactly in agreement with. |
