As I started from the bottom of your profile and am moving upwards to The Search, so far everything has been sad and it is nice to know that you can do happy imagery just as well as the sad. I loved this poem, I only wish my own was this good.

When I see fireworks again, I'll remember the fireworks in the young woman's heart.

You are a writer.

nice poem...you really are a good writer...i'm not really the type to be writing a poem but i really like reading one and your's is really amazing it makes me dream about it.

ps.could you read my fantasy weird story that i wrote if you have time?

pps. i'm adding you to my fav author list so i can read all ur writing...hope you don't mind.

wow this is so sweet! the rhyming is awesome and it flows really well, great job!

Ilove it! I've had a similar experience, and I can say that you have done beautifully with portatying it here. Keep it up!

Well, hey there! I really really like this poem and (::sigh::) wish that it could come true for me. lol. anyway, i think this is really cool and thanks so much for reviewing my story. Dream People is kinda just a one-shot story and i don't think you should expect any more chapters coming from it. I'm probably going to be taking it down soon. If you want to, you can read my much better story up there, "Elements: Earth, Air, Fire, Water" but i will discourage you from reading it until i put in my profile that it's chapters 1-7 are completely revised. The story is in kind of a state of chaos at the moment and needs serious revising, which (unfortunately) i have barely any time for, seeing as i just started my first year in high school and i'm still trying to adjust. (i've only been in high school for three weeks now and i already hate it) well, until next time!
~April~

ah i like. especially with the allusion of fireworks here. nice job and kep it up gurl!

OH MY GOODNESS!! This was so beautifully written!! How do you do it, i actually felt like i was there with my boyfrined!! AHH god, please tell me how u do it!! lol, if you can review some of my things please? lol your going on my favorites!

I didn't have enough time to read anything longer than a poem, so I picked this one. It's so romantic and sweet and lovely! I hope that was a true story. It made me smile.
Really, it's full of beautiful imagery; I can just see the lights and almost hear the sounds of exploding fireworks.

That was so very sweet! I love it! Adding to my favorites.

I almost hate to admit it but I actually like this poem. It is very well written, good rhyme and rythm.
Bravo.

wow! that is beautiful! i can envision the entire scene! great job!
Ty for reading my ...erm journal entry... i'll read your story as soon as i can... i promise... but i didn't write it on purpose:-s LOL
Either way...more important here is the beauty of this poem...the stregth of it is marvelous, great job! hugs, bear.

okay i've most likely read this before seeing as it's familiar but here i am nevertheless. congratz and i am proud to be ...okay i forgot what i was saying so let's say canadian? lol lub panda girly's poem...elynny harhar
kick ** dahlinz
peaceout rock on fading
-nessa

oh! that's the sweetest poem i've ever read! you have such a beautiful way with words! i ADORE the ending! :-D :-D i'm gonna go love everyone now... awesome job!