i can relate. good job

I like this. It describes exactly how I get when I'm upset. I put on soem AFI and dream that I'm somewhere very fara way from the hurt I"m feeling at the current moment.

This is good. Sweet deep- everything. I enjoyed this alot!_yin

Okay, I swear to GOD I've read this. LiveJournal, maybe? I don't know, maybe I'm just slow...
Alrighty-O
I like it.
It's nicely put together and uses some pretty damn good metaphors for everything.
Although sad, it's also very thoughtful.
I still like it. I promise to read more of your stuff from now on and to stop procrastinating :D

ah, honey, you write so beautifully. You truly do. *sighs* I wish I could write like you.
Two spelling mistakes: Fourth line from bottom - my instead of me. Eighth line from the bottom: turn instead of torn.
Wonderful poem!

yes yes, we all have an imaginary place to escape reality...very good details and point of view. keep up the good writing!
-anime freakizoid X^_^X