just exactly cant why someone with magic rule the land. i dont know why i really dont like the last sentence. anyways, good chptr and looking forward to readign more.

whoa, awesome way to end the chapter. i like the fight scene, well done. it wasnt well enough to earn the rank of brilliant, but it was done well enough. you do a good job describing the cold and the wind earlier in the chapter and i look forward to reading more.

i think i read somewhere there's no difference between genius, sainthood, and insanity. definately fits the example of our crazy.

just of out of curiousity but are jon and malheira supposed to get together. course, the only way to find out is to read more. great chapter, great ending.

wow, even though the chapters are short, they are most definitely intense. yay, thanks for clearing up the whole vision/reality confusion =) let's see what this demon will do to her... hopefully, iana or jon could save her =|

hmm thanks for all the encouragement =) i'm working on the next chapter plus the re-write/revision. the latter is extremely boring but has to be done. oh well, take care hun. you're doing awesome.

goodnight ::yawns, falling on the dest fast asleep::

~bubblegum

like everything else you write, very good. i like rheina, reminds me of most nine year olds. a pretty good bit of descrption.

five years later, seems like a new chapter.the description is as before. however, rheina comes off as arrogant now.

hopefully, she wont turn into stereotypical female hero, mary sue.

THANKS FOR THE REVIEW! I'm glad you liked the poem, I really like this story, The wording is elequent, the plot is interesting and you have created great characters. cool'ness.

Hmm...it's pretty good. It seems to opening up into a tale of sacrifice out of neccessity. I'll just have to read the rest of it to see how Rei, well, Reina handles things, huh?

One thing I noticed though:

"When I reached the bottom, I called out,"

Then, it just skips to another paragraph. It might happen because of the site's system though. It happens to my stories at times. Otherwise, I guess it's okay..I should read it over since I did skim it mostly. :) Good luck with it.

wow this is a good story you really have to pay attention to what is happening cause there is so many different flashes and try to remember what is the present and what is the futer and or past but i like it. more

uh kinda got lost in this chapter

Eek! Rat! Rat!

Just joking. I love rats :P Unless they bite. Then it's back into the cage for them!

Can't wait to find out what a Transer, or even a Hamma's Fold person is. Keep typing!

~ponteh

God, you just had to put in that last sentence! Damn cliffy... update soon, pretty please! Hmm and I do wonder what Hamma's fold is... some sort of clan against the priestess? A clan of powerful seers? Update soon... pretty please!

Oh right, and damn Jon for not doing anything except looking at her like that... lol maybe he got offended by the puppy-dog comment ;o) Playin'

Byee!

Well interesting, I wonder if the Priestess actually healed her. How strange, well this story was enjoyable though it did take a while to read. I eagerly await your next chapter!

Wow, these last two visions were pretty uh strange. I'm not quite sure what to think yet.

Hmm is it the Council of Went or the Counil of Weld? I stopped reading here last night and i dont remember if it was previously mentioned. Well i'm sure it will be clairfied next chapter. (well your chapters got really short suddenly lol)