I really enjoyed this piece, though, to be perfectly honest, I'm not entirely sure why. I think it has to do with the fact that it is simple enough to relate to, if not the images you use, then at least the sentiment. I especially liked the line: "The character grows in story time", it fits perfectly in your poem, and even by itself.

yep, i know the feeling. those dreams are part of the reason that i hate sleep...

Loved this. Paying attention to what dreams really are...Sometime right, sometimes mixed up thoughts, interpretations. Great!

oh I see the picture in my mind, I can understand this one- I have crazy dreams all the time. Your penname is accurate- you're an impressionist of words

Again, great job kiddo.
You can create one helluva poem.
The Great McPhail

great stuff.
talking about misinterpreted thoughts, i think a guy likes me because that's what happened in my dream... yes and that's all it ever will be, a dream. hahaha!

a wonderful poem! amazing job done here ;)

I like the first half of this poem but i find it hard to understand/relate to the second half. It seems really scattered (even though it is about a dream) i can't seem to put my finger on it. Also in lines 19 and 20, did you repeat the line for effect only?

I like it.. very powerful and nicely written