O_o Not the kind of poetry I'm used to reading (not into the whole lovey-dovey stuff), but you wrote it well.
Somehow this line: "As tears fall for eternity’s latest count" reminded me of the last episode of Chrno Crusade (an anime that is REALLY good) that I recently watched *starts crying* IT WAS SO SADD!
I guess the point I'm trying to make *is still crying 'bout Chrno Crusade* is that you did a good job.
~Dream

this was so beautiful! i could picture everything that was happening, and that's a rare occurence.

(wipes away a tear) beautifull reminds me of the old celtic love song i love it its great
Mat