 Zakuyoe 2007-10-23 . chapter 1Whoa, you have a fictionpress account! Not that you really use it anymore, as it seems. . . .
I liked it, especially the dialogue between the two. It's got my thumbs up, definitely.
You should write more stuff, seriously. . . . I think that'd be awesome. Personally I'm gonna start delving more into original works. . . if you aren't going to write SP or HP stuff, you should totally write original stuff. Granted you haven't written anything since '06 or so. . . but still!
Anyway, good story. I'll read more of your stuff shortly.
-Zak |
 Lady E 2007-03-19 . chapter 1Nice interaction between them, all the way through, and actually believable. :) |
 Shiri-Matakami 2006-07-19 . chapter 1i hope you know that this was highly entertaining :p
this totally reminded me of my sister for some reason...
she named her computer Alphonce, and says she would marry it if she could.
:p
i very much like your writting style and i just finished your "useing the buddy system" story and wanted to satisfy my need for more mages...
:p
i hope you can update soon!
Shiri MatakamiLord of Fish |
 Ashye 2005-08-09 . chapter 1That was absolutely adorable. I loves it, lol. Besides that, what Colin said was true, if you name your computer and are nice to it then it'll be nice to you!(I named my fredrick. I call him Fred) |
 kelseypaige 2005-07-11 . chapter 1That was SO cute.
...so, is there a sequal to this? =D
/FallenFantasist |
 Skyla Moon 2005-05-22 . chapter 1Oh my gosh I loved it! Excellent. And maybe I should try naming my own computer... then it would love me? |
 Huy Ho 2005-02-09 . chapter 1Very nice story :) |
 Wolfwitch 2004-09-16 . chapter 1That was delightful. A nice funny blurb to light up my day. I'm glad I found it. Collin is a hoot and Jer is... Well, I like his style. |
 subtleline 2004-09-11 . chapter 1I LUVED this! so cute! Damn was it adorable and hilarious! |
 newtypeshadow 2004-09-09 . chapter 1oh lord. i am a gay boy named colin. (i'd long suspected...) ^__^
this is the funniest thing. these two boys-with-"i"s are wonderful and lovable and completely *normal *guys**. i love the shyness without sap, and general best-friend vibes through the playfullness and confession and after. just--love.
"So what would you say if I propositioned you for sex?" |
 NotEnough 2004-08-27 . chapter 1 Hehe. Well, that's definately a new way to come out to your friends!
Anyway,it was cute and short (which i like) and i can definately relate to the evil computer thing.
XD. |
 Tani Barton 2004-08-26 . chapter 1*giggle* That was really cute. Keepin' it real, I like that. Oh, and the malevolent computer sounds sadly plausible. Thankfully, my computer already has a name. *pats Vivi* Anyway, I liked it a lot. Great job! |