 friend.of.bronwen 2004-08-29 . chapter 1Oh, bravo, bravo! An excellent poem! As I read, I greatly enjoyed trying to guess which stories you were rhyming about. Might I also add, the rhymes seem brilliantly effortless. Fantastic work! I shall definitely read this again. |
 Seeker of the Way 2004-08-29 . chapter 1Very well written. I love to read, I do not read much fantasy, tho. I read SpellSinger for a few books, A couple Shanarra books, saw the Ring trilogy, other odds and ends. Oh, there is some repetition here. Riddle, King, for example. Nice!! |
 LuthienLuin 2004-08-28 . chapter 1WOW! Yay, I love this! They all relate so well, and of course I love the third stanza so much! I don't know how you can summarize such a long book so well and get to the heart of it! Yay again! |
 Tasbeeh 2004-08-26 . chapter 1wow. this is so great. i love it. your vocabulary is very large and the wording is perfect. this is going on my favorites. |
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