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Manuel Fajar 2005-02-25 . chapter 1
i wish it were this simple,

the reason that men go back,

abandon hospitals clean,

to risk their lives and wade muck,

is not for politicians,

neither for some religion,

not even for their dear wives,–

but for their brothers in arms.
Seeker of the Way 2004-08-29 . chapter 1
yAy! good job, loads of really clever bits! The rhymes, the wording! w00t!
you do say "into to" once.
Tasbeeh 2004-08-26 . chapter 1
I love it! its so great. you seem to know what exactly your going to write before you write it. (i have to kinda go with the flow) this is so great. good job.
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