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| kt in the sky 2005-04-17 ch 1,  | abusegreat poem. or is it a song? sorry i don't pay much atetion to genres... :-P but i really like it. the johnny poem wasn't really related to the old man one, i just put it as a sequal b/c they were both having to do with the rain songs and they were written in sorta the same way. and yes the princess bride is a book! isn't that interesting. but you know in the movie the grandpa is reading the book so...yeah. you should read it, if you want. yeah...um..o.0 lol thanks for the review! i put you in my profile under special thanks bye the way. ^.^ update camp! k ill leave you in peace...for now! buh bye! -k |
| kashe 2005-03-20 ch 1, anon. | abusehi! this is a good poem. :-) no i never stole your character :-) i had already written that and i had sort of based pepper off of myself on the computer so that is why i said u could call the character is YOUR story pepper. :-) hope you get it! sorry. :-) keep writing. -kay |
| Jack Lumber 2004-09-06 ch 1, | abusewould make a nice song. I think you were going for that. Makes me think of Lincoln Park |
| Superus Stupidicus 2004-08-27 ch 1, | abusenice poem. I didn't quite get it but I like the flow and rythm |
| negligible fictional force 2004-08-27 ch 1, | abusethis has good rhythm. it flows. -kismet. |