|Reviews for Already Broken|
| Rose of Darkness 666 8/28/04 . chapter 1
Wow, really dark. I love the ending, the last stanza. You're great with the rhyming. How do you do it?
| battousai24 8/27/04 . chapter 1
Once again, the rhyming did well. I loved it... 'Broken...' A wonderful word.
| Faithless Juliet 8/27/04 . chapter 1
Great use of rhyming skills, really you have a talent in rhym, I could never do all that you did. Keep up the good work.