Wow, that was really good! I feel like it really captured a truth or something. I was (or am, depending) actually trying to write something along the same lines of your poem with the title of "To a Lost Generation", but it's proving to be extremely difficult, so I know how much work you must have put in to that. Nice job. :-)

I can't say in good conscience that I agree with what your saying here, because I don't but looking past that you did capture several feelings and emotions in this and created a very compelling piece.
J.