|Reviews for Negligent Chaos|
| simpleplan13 9/9/04 . chapter 1
here we go again with these poems.. you should so put them in a collection it would be amazing (and only take up one slot on my fav stories)
| krystal-jasna 9/3/04 . chapter 1
hi, i like the way you write. it makes me think and reflect. but then again i suppose if i never experienced this before i won't understand it fully. but yeah overall great poem :)
| Oath 8/31/04 . chapter 1
Sad yet sweet yet heartwrenching.. i can't make up my mind. Wonderfully written though.
| Manuel Fajar 8/28/04 . chapter 1
A blow to the solar plexus I wasn't read to receive-left me helpless for a while. Well written, though tough subject. -m-
| sheza 8/27/04 . chapter 1
Really, very beautiful!
thanks a lot for your review! It was very appreciated!
| i-kill-4-fun 8/27/04 . chapter 1
beautiful. ur on my fave author's list
| be afraid be very afraid 8/27/04 . chapter 1
I REALLY LIKE THIS. ITS SURREAL AND WILL BE WHATEVER U WANT IT TO BE.
| wiener knocker 8/27/04 . chapter 1
usually id say this poems wreaks like crusty onion toes, but... eh its was pretty good, i bet your hot too not like these ugly ass bitches they got runnin around this gayass website, man keep it up sugar, hur dee hurr hur, LATER HOOCHIE MAMA