wow very nice descriptions

*applauds* Wow. Great job. It's so.. beautiful and... poetic. Hehe, I know I say that alot, but it's true. Your writing style is just so.. mystical.

wow, that's awesome! you're quite a good storyteller, chica, ya know that? ;) really fantastic introduction, with all the amazing imagery, and i love how you switch the viewpoint on us in the fourth stanza ~ mixes things up a bit. really good ending, as well. loved it!

man, if medusa came and stoneded my huddi id be **...
anyways, you come up with the coolest themes chica! very creative.
lovely poem, very interesting. kudos!

Aww... geez, where do you come up with these plots for these gorgeous poems you write?? They're brilliant, and make for such awesome.. ballads! :D hehe If you lived in the Medieval times, you would totally be the coolest bard there. ;)