Reviews for Faintly of Heart - FictionPress.com

zelle 2004-09-02 ch 1,	abuse... I want to marry that last line. Honest. ... ... can I nitpick, though? just a little? 'Cause I like the idea you have here, but the part where you "become" the shadows seems a little...overdone. It was good the first time, but too many people have written about "becoming shadows" and "being one with the shadows" that, written here, it makes the poem sound somewhat commonplace when it really, really isn't. ... steps off soapbox you have full license to hate me now. cringe!
Faithless Juliet 2004-08-30 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful descriptions and detail. Juliet.
do not resuscitate 2004-08-27 ch 1,	abusehaunting. i loved the last line, it gave the perfect amount of closure. i loved this piece.