Alex this is very interesting babes i like both the physical and yet the metaphors behind this poem though i'm not sure if the last verse went well cuz it doesn't quite end and you have tight twice but other than that the poem is great, Did you get it published?

very interesing and clever image, i love how you compare animals to humans, very clever, each line is great x weasel within x

this is a really good poem iliked it alot _

yet another one, well done. This is great it says a hell of alo more that it well says. It's really deep, well at least the way that I'm looking at it, excellently done
talk to you soon
Keith Andrew

Short and concise with a chilling consideration.
Well Done
KEEP WRITING!
F.C