wow awesome. most of the time i try to read stuff thats already finished so i don't have to wory about updates but this sounded good so i couldn't help but read it.

Holy. My gosh.There are so many elements shared in your story and my story that I think that my mouth was open for the entire reading. Why have you stopped this? Is so great! You write so well! I can't believe there are so many similairties in our two stories! I swear, I wasn't copying u. Even the beach reference!! That's crazy!I'm sorry for ranting but awesome start!! Wo!

Please Continue.

omgosh i loved it!! i thought i had reviewed for it before?? guess not, i think your stories is one of the ones the FP wouldn't let me because the server was down or somethin like that! but i love this story! it rox! ah update soon update soon!

O! Its really interesting~! I feel bad for Leon-and Jonah too ><
So Llyr is...A merman? Sea thing? lol. Thats cool. Oh yay! Mpreg! Hahahaha
-cackles evily- gotta love the mpreg.XD Its really well written and you asked so i'll tell-your characters are great =D. Leon sounds...yummeh! XP
Keep it up~! And update son ^_~;

I love friendship boy love. Not so much on Mpreg, but I think I'll bare through it for this. No idea where you're going or how yourgoing to get get there, so write more!

Yay, I finally got to read it. :3 And I can definitely see why you said you'd want to extend the story. So sad. ;.;

As far as I can tell, Leon and Jonah seem well-developed. Even if their personalities/reactions haven't been fully explored yet, they’re very realistic. Jonah's reaction to Leon's declaration of love seemed especially realistic to me, as well--as much as I would have loved them just to kiss and make up, it makes things more believable when everything doesn't sort out so easily immediately. ^^; As for the final character ... well, Llyr seems realistic for a mer-dude, but he separated Jonah and Leon and he therefore doesn’t earn and brownie points from me. *shifty eyes*

Anyway, off to a nice start; I hope to see more (and fluffiness >3) soon! *nudge* ^_^

Luv,
Lilias

Loved it! Please update soon!