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Reviews For: Sunburst
vanya moonshine 2004-12-08 . chapter 1
Beautifully written! I hope you're not getting annoyed with all my reviews! :)
Emi Amara 2004-08-28 . chapter 1
Hi! I like it, it's very cute and paints a pretty image! Well done!
**WG
sprtgurl0001 2004-08-28 . chapter 1
I love this poem. It gives a nice feel about the morning. View my work right now there is only one poem but i will have more.
redlady27 2004-08-27 . chapter 1
beautiful poem.
Chasing Whimsy 2004-08-27 . chapter 1
Very well written piece. Particularly the last stanza; I loved how you described it.
The only line that seemed a bit awkward to me was "And what it has to play." Did you intentionally write play? I thought maybe it was meant to read "say."
But anyway, it's a very nice sunrise poem.
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