 vanya moonshine 2004-12-08 . chapter 1Beautifully written! I hope you're not getting annoyed with all my reviews! :) |
 Emi Amara 2004-08-28 . chapter 1Hi! I like it, it's very cute and paints a pretty image! Well done!
**WG |
 sprtgurl0001 2004-08-28 . chapter 1I love this poem. It gives a nice feel about the morning. View my work right now there is only one poem but i will have more. |
 redlady27 2004-08-27 . chapter 1beautiful poem. |
 Chasing Whimsy 2004-08-27 . chapter 1Very well written piece. Particularly the last stanza; I loved how you described it.
The only line that seemed a bit awkward to me was "And what it has to play." Did you intentionally write play? I thought maybe it was meant to read "say."
But anyway, it's a very nice sunrise poem. |