This chapter is great! I like how Veronica can see the future and past...very interesting. I'm very interested in the relationship that's forming between Amadeus and Veronica too. Keep it up!
Hillary

Another amazing chapter (of course, lol)! I didn't think it was a bit boring! Ah, I absolutely love the way Amadeus ordered the Guardian around after he got out. I can't wait to see what happens next, so hurry but don't rush ;)
Hillary

much coolness! im dying 2 no who these dar margerth people r and why they call the guy the storm bringer...write more!!

Whoa, this is so great! I absolutely love the characters so far (and the setting is wonderful)! You have to continue this of course. 'eerie shine that seemed to catch hold of your soul and keep it captured inside them' I love this line!! Ah, it is so descriptive! Great work and keep it up!
Hillary