Another great poem !! Had me ceeped out for awhile. Well done !!

~* Noelle *~

oh, please don't stay away from haiku. there's so much beauty in it (both the concept of haiku as well as your own lovely one)-- one of the most difficult things to do is choose the shortest words but keep maximum effect: kudos for absolutely mastering that.

cheers-- lin

interesting format, and i think ive seen it from her, but i dont know if she started it, muchly fantasmical, good job

Outstanding. ¡A google of gooles of stars awarded! Rhyme with profundity—how rare! BTW I'd wipe out the apologia—it's not needed. m

I agree with everyone else--you really *can* do a spooky job writing poety in any format! *claps* ^^

I'm not really big on haiku myself, but the title "sui generis" caught my eye... and I liked the phrases. I look forward to reading more of your works.

Yay spliced! I remember hoping you would try these since you seem to be the master of all format poems. Brilliantly done, grovelgrovel etc. ;)
~lyv

You and 'Death by Association' are really getting me into poetry. This is good stuff.

Oo...your particular word choice is spiffyness incarnate. It really does sound like part of story. I like how it's about a demon, but also mentioning light...that's pretty rare. These spliced haikus are cool formats, I've never tried one yet...I should at some point. :P Nice alliteration, too. Good stuff, as usual. ^_^

i love supernatural stuff, so this was awesome! Great work! Keep writing your Haikus, they're good!

Interesting ideas. I often think Haikus would be useful if one was writing a story and wanted a poem to introduce each chapter or something like that. I liked this, anyway.