Great poem. A lot of emotion...keep writing!

Don't let yourself get lost forever. This is the way my mom makes me feel a lot of the time, maybe I'll show it to her... You're so good at portraying emotions, especially sadness. It's beautiful.

Wow, I love it. I left a poem like this somewhat to show my parents how I feel. Anyway I'm just saying that these words really got to me...in a good way. Thanks.