FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Lorki 2008-05-11 ch 1,  | abuseThis is amazing and I love it. I can relate to it concerning the amount of very wealthy people I've known to be completely just... blind to so much stuff. I just love how powerful this is and the rhyming is great. |
| somefreakylooknchick 2005-01-24 ch 1, | abuseoh. my. god. that is awesome. I mean, your writing. Amazing poem. I moves me. On to the favorite stories list it goes. |
| grim-dreamer 2004-10-19 ch 1, | abuseDo you recall the wisdom of Don Delillo? |
| Aducknamedjoe 2004-10-17 ch 1, | abuseAnd how are the rich people to "Pay" for "what they've done?" Should they be forced to fight alongside the "poor?" And here I thought leftists were against the draft... |
| prettynutter 2004-09-25 ch 1, | abusevery well writtain, slightly extremest, but tru |
| XantheXanthias 2004-09-23 ch 1, | abuseyour so stupid, did you ever think of all the GOOD things rich people have done with their money? What, do you want us to be a communist country? Look at how well that's done in the past. |
| Tessa 2004-09-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhoa. In a good way, though. |
| naughty-gal 2004-09-12 ch 1, | abusenice poem its a well written poem and i like the idea of discrimination bwrich and poor |
| the1koolkitty 2004-09-11 ch 1, | abuseVery nice, and true! ^_^ And thank you for reviewing Time to Die, I wrote that one very recently and have received little feedback on it before now. |
| E Chiove 2004-09-04 ch 1, | abuseVery, very good. |
| WizardOfWinter 2004-09-02 ch 1, | abuseA very, very well written poem, I must say. I don't see why you are blaming the rich people, though, for the deaths of the poor. You seem to have left that vague. And, it seems that you are stereotyping that ALL rich people are horrible like this. I know rich people and they are the nicest people I know. Money doesn't make you a horrbile person. If you had a choice between poverty and the high life, you know what you would pick. So yeah. It's too stereotypical for my taste. But other than that, excellent job in conveying your message. |
| Ovaia Pelosa 2004-09-02 ch 1, | abuseok, anynomous, sweetie, where you livin at? outdated? three million people in AMERICA dont have enough food to eat. and this is the richest country in the world! o, were you suckered into thinking we went to iraq to LIBERATE the people, and its just some funny irony that dick cheneys COMPANY made BILLIONS of dollars from it. come on. there aint nobody saying that everyones gotta be perfectly equal, were just sayin everybody should be treated like a human being. if you dont agree with that than i really cant help you there. |
| Anonymous 2004-09-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is bland class warfare that dates back to the communist revolution in Russia. Congratulations, you've managed to drag your views almost one hundred years behind modern politics. |
| Kur'denras 2004-08-29 ch 1, | abuseGood poem. Screw the rich! Check out my poem, "Greed and Gluttony" its partially an attack on the rich, among other things. |
| Half Mart 2004-08-28 ch 1, | abuseloved it man, it was really good |