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| k. k. jeanne 2004-08-30 ch 1, | abuseoh my gosh so with all these poems and stories whining about how horrible life is, this is a beacon! well done on writing about something simple and nice! some brilliantly funny lines "they're horrible - i think i'm in love" "no one can inhale cake as well as me - it's a gift!" that made me smile. so yes - good job, well done, keep it lightehearted! |